Miguel's narrative writing

Mark brought his snapper from the fish and chips shop and he was at home in a kitchen. It was dinner time he couldint wait to cut his snapper. Mark was very hungry and the dinner was delicous.The phone    rang he was worried becuse he wanted to eat his delicous dinner. It was joe on the phone. While he was talking on the phone the big cat ate Mark's snapper because he was not at his dinner table.