Friday, February 15, 2013

Willem's Birthday

Building Lego cars, look at them  race.
Zooming, Speeding, Racing.
Opening presents all day long.
Shredding, Pulling, Tearing.
Birthdays are so much fun!                                                                                                                                                            

4 comments:


  1. I really enjoyed reading your poem.I really like the first sentence of how you said look at them race.From Savahna.

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  2. Hi Willem, that's a cool poem. I like how you wrote about your lego birthday party last year. From Belle

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  3. Willem, I like how you have put a lot of adjectives into your poem. From James.

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  4. I like your poem! by Catherine

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