Tuesday, July 31, 2012

My Holiday by Bailey

The students were asked to draw a photo picture of an event they enjoyed during the school holiday. Then they had to describe what was going on in the ‘photo’.

This is a photo of my family and me climbing a high, scary rock. I thought that I was going to fall off the scary rock but once I climbed the first rock I was scared. I climbed all the way up to the top and saw an awesome view of lots of trees and my mum climbing up the last rock. Then everyone else climbed to the top of the rock.


  1. I really like your holiday story Bailey. I am really impressed with the way you have been working in the writing programme. From Miss Rodger

  2. Sounds soooooooo scary and exciting Bailey !!

  3. Awesome story Bailey I hope you have more adventures and scary
    weekends.From Rio